Compelling Characters

Creating compelling characters is one of the most crucial aspects of writing fiction. You want to write characters who leap off the page, characters who you’d like to meet in real life, characters who truly resonate with your readers. But this is not easy!

The Heart of Your Story: Why Characters Matter

Characters are at the very heart of your story. They drive the plot and make your readers laugh and cry. They connect your readers to the narrative. It doesn’t matter how sophisticated your plot is, without well-developed characters it’s going to fall short. A truly compelling character can elevate your book from good to excellent.

Know Your Characters Inside Out

Before you start writing, spend some time getting to know your characters. Create detailed character profiles. Include their background, personality traits, motivations, and even their quirks. Think about their childhood, their relationships with family and friends … the more you know about them, the more authentic they’ll feel.

Show, Don’t Tell

Showing rather than telling is particularly important when it comes to creating compelling characters. Instead of stating that a character is brave, show them in a situation where they have to face their fears. Use actions, dialogue, and internal monologues to reveal who they are. This approach not only makes your characters more believable but also engages readers more deeply.

Give Them Flaws

No human being is perfect, so neither should your characters be. Perfect characters can also be a little boring, whereas imperfections make them interesting and relatable. Give your characters flaws, weaknesses, and struggles. These human traits make them more relatable and provide room for growth and development. Think of Elizabeth Bennet’s prejudice or Harry Potter’s impulsiveness – these flaws make them memorable and endearing.

Develop Strong Motivations

Your characters need clear motivations that drive their actions and decisions. Think about what they want, but also think about why they want it, and what they are willing to do to achieve it. Characters with vague or weak motivations are less convincing, and fail to fully engage the reader. Strong motivations, by contrast, add depth and believability.

Let Them Evolve

Characters need to be changed by what they experience during your story. They need to evolve. Their experiences should shape them … and this transformation is what keeps readers invested. Whether it’s a hero overcoming their fears or a villain finding redemption, character arcs are essential for a satisfying narrative. Ensure your characters’ growth feels natural and earned, not forced or rushed.

Dialogue: Make It Count

Dialogue is a powerful tool for character development. Each character should have a distinct voice that reflects their personality, background, and motivations. Try not to make your characters sound the same. Can you tell who is speaking, just by the way their dialogue is written? Pay attention to their speech patterns (long or short sentences?), vocabulary (which may be dictated by their education), and tone. Well-crafted dialogue can reveal a lot about a character without needing to spell it out.

Conclusion: Keep Crafting Compelling Characters

Creating compelling characters is both an art and a science. It requires creativity, empathy, and attention to detail. As an editor, my job is to help writers bring their characters to life in the most authentic and engaging way possible. So, keep crafting, keep refining, and most importantly, keep believing in your characters. They are, after all, the heart and soul of your story.